Tuesday, April 3, 2012

suggestions


My paper is based on the analysis of the Curious George the book and the movie. While writing my paper I had a tendency to describe the things George did as “curious.” Although this is fitting, it became too repetitive. The people peer editing my paper pointed out where my words were repeating and also looked up some suggestions for other similar words. This is very helpful to me because I have a bad habit of using the same words in all my works. I have found a better way to phrase most of the points about George in my paper so far so that it doesn’t come off as repetitive.

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